Rose like a steam of rich distill'd perfumes, Was took ere she was ware, and wish'd she might Still to be so displac'd. I was all ear, have stream for steam. A manifest Solemn is used to characterize the music of the nightingale, Par. L. iv. 648. "Night's solemn "bird." And she is called "the "solemn .nightingale," vii. 435. T. Warton. Before these two lines were corrected as they are at present, the author had written them thus, At last a sweet and solemn breathing sound But in a young genius there should always be something to lop and prune away. As Cicero says, De Orat. ii. 21. volo esse in adolescente, unde aliquid amputem. If there is not something redundant in youth, there will be something deficient in age. 560.I was all ear.] So Catullus, of a rich perfume, carm. xiii. 13. Quod tu cum elfacies, deos rogabis Totum ut te faciant, Fabulle, nasum. There is the same thought, in Jonson's Underw. vol. vi. 451. 560 And in Shakespeare, but differently expressed. Winter's Tale, act iv. s. S. Of hearing a song. "All their other senses "stuck in their ears." And in the Tempest, Prospero says, "No "tongues, all eyes." Compare also Herrick's Hesperides, p. 21. edit. 1648. 8vo. When I thy singing next shall heare Ile wish I might turne ALL to eare. This thought, and expression, occurs first in Drummond's Sonnets, 1616. Signat. D. 2. To the nightingale. Such sad lamenting straines, that Become all care, starres stay to heare T. Warton. 561.-that might create a soul Under the ribs of death:] The general image of creating a soul by harmony is again from Shakespeare. But the particular one of a soul under the ribs of death, which is extremely grotesque, is taken from a picture in Alciat's emblems, where a soul in the figure of an infant is represented within the ribs of a skeleton, as in its prison. This curious picture is presented by Quarles. Warburton. That might create a soul, that is, says Mr. Sympson, recreate, avaYuxu: and Mr. Theobald proposed to read recreate, And took in strains might recreate à soul: Under the ribs of death: but O ere long 565 Too well I did perceive it was the voice But further know I not. 570 575 How are ye join'd with hell in triple knot, Against th' unarmed weakness of one virgin but I presume they knew not of And s. 8. the Ghost to Hamlet, the allusion just mentioned. 563. Too well I did perceive] In the Manuscript it is. Too well I might perceive. it harrows me with fear and I could a tale unfold, whose lightest word Would harrow up thy soul. 574. The aidless innocent Ludy] At first he had written helpless, but altered it, that word occurring again within a few lines afterwards. Alone, and helpless! Is this the confidence You gave me, Brother? ELDER BROTHER. Yes, and keep it still, 585 Lean on it safely; not a period Shall be unsaid for me: against the threats Which erring men call Chance, this I hold firm, Surpris'd by unjust force, but not inthrall'd; And mix no more with goodness, when at last 590 595 and exalted sentiments of the Stoics concerning the power of virtue. Thyer. 597. Self-fed, and self-consum'd:] This image is wonderfully fine. It is taken from the conjectures of astronomers concerning the dark spots, which from time to time appear on the surface of the sun's body, and after a while disappear again, which they suppose to be the scum of that fiery matter, which first breeds it, and then breaks thro' and consumes it. Warbur➡ ton. 598. The pillar'd firmament] See Paradise Regained, iv. 455. and the note there. And earth's base built on stubble. But come let's on. Against th' opposing will and arm of heaven May never this just sword be lifted up; But for that damn'd magician, let him be girt Harpies and Hydras, or all the monstrous forms 602. But for that damn'd magician, let him be girt, &c.] Compare P. R. iv. 626. et seq. T. Warton. 605. Harpies and hydras, or all the monstrous forms.] Or spoils the metre. Yet an anapæst may be admitted in the third part, see v. 636. 682. Although this last is not an anapæst. But any foot of three syllables may be admitted in this place of an iambic verse, if the licence be not taken too frequently. Hurd. Harpies and hydras are a combination in an enumeration of monsters, in Sylvester's Du Bartas, p. 206. fol. ut supr. 600 605 Such as those which Carlo and All monsters which hot Africke forth "Twixt Nilus, Atlas, and the southern cape, Where all there met. Milton often copies Fairfax, and not his original. T. Warton. 607.-to restore his purchase back,] He had written at first -to release his new got prey. -- 608. to a foul death, And th' ugly Gorgons, and the edition of 1637, it is Hydraes and harpies gan to yawne 605. T. Warton. -or all the monstrous forms] In Milton's Manuscript, and the edition of 1637 it is, or all the monstrous bugs; which word was in more familiar use formerly, and hence bugbear. 605. all the monstrous forms 'Twixt Africa and Ind,] -and cleave his scalp Down to the hips: and he has preserved the same image in his Paradise Lost, speaking of Moloch, vi. 361. Down cloven to the waist, with shatter'd arms And uncouth pain fled bellowing: and no wonder he was led to it by his favourite romances, and his favourite plays. Jonson has SPIRIT. Alas! good vent'rous Youth, I love thy courage yet, and bold emprise ; Be those that quell the might of hellish charms: 610 the same image in the Fox, act the same, Paradise Lost, xi. 642. iii. s. 8. -O that his well driv'n sword Had been so covetous to have cleft me down Unto the navel. Spenser uses the word, Faery -whose warlike name Is far renown'd through many a bold emprise. And Shakespeare in Macbeth, And Fairfax, cant. ii. st. 77. act i. s. 2. Till he unseam'd him from the nave to th' chops. 611. But here thy sword can do I know Mr. Warburton reads thee little stead; &c.] Virgil, Æn. here -from the nape to th' chops, and supports it very ingeniously; but if any alteration were necessary, I should rather read Till he unseam'd him from the chops to th' nave. Nay Shakespeare carries it so far as to make Coriolanus cleave men down from head to foot. Coriolanus, act ii. s. 6. -his sword, (death's stamp) ii. 521. Non tali auxilio, nec defensoribus See Æn. vi. 290. Tasso, cant. xv. Before the poet had corrected this line, he had written, But here thy steel can do thee small avail. 613. Be those that quell the might of hellish charms:] Com Where it did mark, it took from face pare Shakespeare's K. Richard to foot. But notwithstanding these instances, I believe every reader will agree that Milton altered the passage much for the better in the edition of 1645. Or drag him by the curls to a foul death, Curs'd as his life. III. act iii. s. 4. With devilish plots Of damned witchcraft; and that have prevail'd Upon my body with their hellish charms. T. Warton. 614. He with his bare wand can unthread thy joints, And crumble all thy sinews.] 610.—and bold emprise;] See He had written at first, |