Vow, alack, for youth unmeet, My flocks feed not, My ewes breed not, My rams speed not, Love is dying, Heart's denying, Causer of this. XV All my merry jigs are quite forgot, All my lady's love is lost, God wot: Where her faith was firmly fix'd in love, Wrought all my loss; O frowning fortune, cursed, fickle dame! For now I see, Inconstancy More in women than in men remain. 5 Do not call it, &c.] This couplet is supplied from the song as given in Love's Labour's Lost, act iv. sc. 3. In black mourn I, All help needing, (O cruel speeding !) Fraughted with gall. My shepherd's pipe can sound no deal 6 Procures to weep, In howling-wise, to see my doleful plight. How sighs resound Through heartless ground, Like a thousand vanquish'd men in bloody fight! Clear wells spring not, Sweet birds sing not, Green plants bring not 6 no deal] i. e. in no degree. 7 With sighs so deep, is Procures, &c.] "The dog procures (i. e. manages matters) so as to weep." STEEVENS. The whole passage probably corrupt. Shakespeare certainly wrote none of this wretched piece. Malone in his last edition printed it as given in Weelkes's Madrigals. Flocks all sleeping, Nymphs back peeping Fearfully. All our pleasure known to us poor swains, All our evening sport from us is fled, All our love is lost, for love is dead. Thy like ne'er was For a sweet content, the cause of all my moan: 9 Poor Coridon Must live alone, Other help for him I see that there is none XVI. Whenas thine eye hath chose the dame, lass] The reading in Weelkes's Madrigals: old copy, "love. moan] The reading in England's Helicon: old copy, 66 woe. 10 smite] I have taken the liberty of altering the reading of the old copy "strike" to " smite," for the sake of the rhyme. 12 fancy] i. e. love. might] i. e. power.—Malone in his last edition adopted Steevens's conjecture 66 tike," to rhyme with "strike." And when thou com'st thy tale to tell, But plainly say thou lov'st her well, What though her frowning brows be bent, And twice desire, ere it be day, What though she strive to try her strength, And to her will frame all thy ways; The strongest castle, tower, and town, Serve always with assured trust, Unless thy lady prove unjust, Press never thou to choose anew: When time shall serve, be thou not slack The wiles and guiles that women work, 13 Think women still to strive with men, To sin, and never for to saint: There is no heaven, by holy then, When time with age shall them attaint. But soft; enough,-too much I fear, 13 Think women, &c.] These four lines are scarcely intelligible in a MS. copy of the poem, belonging to S. Lysons, Esq. they stand thus: "Think women love to match with men, And not to live so like a saint: Here is no heaven; they holy then Begin, when age doth them attaint." |